In this essay I’ll be writing all about “should there be such thing as just war” . I’m hoping to convince you to agree with me that there should not be such thing as just war.
One of my reasons that having war all the time is friendship what I mean by friendship is if all the world doesn’t get along then we can’t get resources from other countries.This could cause starvation a lack of food and other types of material thais very valuable to us.Also this could stop immigration from other countries this also would cause the country to become more poorly and then we can’t afford to protect ourself from the attacks comming towards us.
My second reason is if we have just war then we would have less people on earth which would cause less fighters in the army to save us from a great and large war.Also if we have less people on earth then if we do find out that just war is a horrible thing then there wouldn’t be enouph people to repopulate then all hope on earth would be lost and lead the survivors to suiside then the evolution of the human raise would be finished and the next level would be over. Finally if there was less people on earth then then the survivors would be lead into insanity and we would have lost all intelligence to survive and only think of war and nothing else than blood and violence which is what we weren’t born for.
My third reason is rights people would loose thier right from were no one would care about others only the winners care in war and the losers become the slaves that are use for thier entertainment. This would be unfair for the world for ebpveryone do you want to live in world were there is no one to trust?Is that how you want to live scavenging to protect your family because of what others have done?None of this can happen if we all work together and get along the we wouldn’t even need weapons ever again the world live happily. Also if your asking on how we could protect our selfs in emergencies then we don’t we would advance so much faster if we don’t worry about war and work together we could make our own intelligence that could negotiate with other people that try and harm them ways.
My fourth point is that the soldiers them selves are harmed in there mind after what they have to experience and they have no ways of communicating to thier families as well as thier friends this means that even more depression would go through thier mind. Also the family that want to get in touch with thier child or husband or father they are effected by this as the don’t have any company to keep them company to help them get through the tough times of war were they think it’s over. It’s even worse when they know that the child is suffering as well as the father.
My fith point is that it is a waste of money to start a war we could be spending the money on supporting those that need it instead of wasting it on death and just to solve a distribution it shouldn’t have to be like that it should be that we look at others than ourselfs. Also if we spent all our money on war then we can’t afford to provide money for workers and those who try to live while in these conditions. This is unfair on those who are really desperate to live and can’t because of selfish acts such as war it hurts people physically and emotionally to make them unstable and scared to stay on earth or to even go around the corner.
This is why I think that there is no such thing as just war.

May 18, 2015 at 12:49 pm
Shane, this is a thoughtful response to a challenging task which uses a range of argumentative strategies including hyperbole very well.
Could I remind you that when typing we always leave a single space after every piece of punctuation. So, for example, after a full stop a new sentence is only begun after a single space. Do not forget in future!
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